Sunday, March 9, 2008

I Sinned

Light is there but they cannot see
Amidst the huge crowd I feel free
They all seemed sad and stunned
It appears something terrible they learned

I am shouting but they didn't listen
My worries, my anxieties deepened
Unheard, neglected I went inside
To see for all this, who is behind

In front of my room was huge crowd
Some sad, some numb while other frowned
Made my way across to see what they have found
And it was me, from the fan hanging down

7 comments:

Vikram said...

i am awesome...lolz ;)

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Vikram said...

a) the soul know pain or joy
b) if he/she wud have been bothered by the pain associated with death then wudnt have committed the suicide at first place.

So none is missing !
PS: Thanks for the comment!

Pinkyandbrain said...

awesome mannnnnnn...gud wokkkkkkkk

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Musings... said...

great work! But I think melancholia is engulfing you too much...! Be happy darling!

Bhavya Jain said...

Nice dude lovely....