Saturday, October 20, 2007

Conclusion !

Seeing Anshika paying no attention to their memories,
Shayan felt choked andfound it difficult to avoid the
imminent
tears which never touched the ground.

Wind blowing in gust then left the window flapping. She
noticed and moved towards the window on the other side
of which was Shayan. The man who always loved her and
promised to do the same irrespective of any damn thing
which might occur.

She then halted near the window, pushed the already half
opened curtains to their extremes and looked outside the
window. Shayan on the other side was looking at her from
so close after a long time. Her deep eyes, long hairs and her
beauty rang the same old bells in his heart.Anshika took a
deep sigh and then closed the window to move back to attend
the phone of same ponderous guy who dropped her home.

Her failure to even sense his presence further amplified his
agony. He then left and was wandering in the streets.While
the sun was busy sinking in the west, weird and spooky sounds
started to come from the cemetery in the outskirts.

Wretched Shayan then reached the cemetery. He bypassed
many graves before he stopped near one, white stone of which
had his name on it. The lonely soul then sat on its grave thinking
about his dead love.

12 comments:

Musings... said...

wow, you are a wonderful writer but such a sad ending!

Musings... said...

I figured it represented a part of your life...yet the articulation of your feelings is very well done...men usually shy away from that so I really admire that! I wish you good luck though, but it is part of life...right?

Musings... said...

You can certainly know my name but
I am unsure about this public domain! :P hehe...that kind of rhymed! Well...are you on orkut?
If you are...here is my profile...
http://www.orkut.com/Profile.aspx?uid=2863231886974355230 ! :)

Pinkyandbrain said...

dude... amazing ending..

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Pinkyandbrain said...

hey man....we r eagerly waiting 4 ur new blog.. keep going...

Unknown said...

wow... never thot this was coming..... very vivid description of feelings yar..... rocking ..... keep writing and make it a bit chirpier this time around.... people have loved your gloomy side not lets showcase the real you...... show us mr. 4th year's chirpier side.... w8ing for ur next story :)

Parag said...

gr8 dude...
a sentimental venture

Vikram said...

Sorry mate...post it again saying
that ending appears slightly
similiar, if it does to wotever..and i will keep it..coz i never plagiarized anyone's work.

PS: Thanks for sparing time and reading.

Vikram said...

the last one for RATAN...

Anonymous said...

agony ...irony... love... pain
life..death....eternity...soul...tears...feelings...grave..truth..
wat else u can ask for.. all is here.. and together they create magic evrytime.....nd they did it again...
nd guess who is da magician this tym...... :P...
loved it...like ....

Sravani said...

its just amazing !!!!